Today in class we had a critique on our personas that we created. Here is the feedback that I received after the class looked over mine.
- Title it as a persona and who it is for
- Change user goals to online activities
- Fix organization
- Show how much of a fan of the show she is (how much time she spends watching it a week)
- Change online activities to bullets to break up space
- Missing the "e" in personal interests
- Change picture (Not Chelsea Clinton)
- Make a second persona based on someone who loves candy
- Proof read!
We also went over wireframes and how to create them. That is our homework for the weekend, to create a home and sub page wireframe taking into consideration our persona and site map.
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